Update: Knight Errant – Text draft (silent)

by pinstripeowl

Put together a (mute) version of the story.
Are intertitle stories engaging? Is it simply TL;DR?
Did you lose interest half way through, did you sit at the end, wishing I had continued?
Are llamas red?
Inquiring minds must know! (Not about the llamas, I’m ok on that).

Knight at the Circus – Mute Text version (Work in Progress) from Pinstripeowl on Vimeo.

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